discussion Take a Peek: My Latest Renders Await Your Thoughts!

[iCheetos]

"I'm making my first game, still learning how to use Daz and Renpy, and I would like to know your honest opinion... What did you think of the renders, did they please you at first sight? Please leave your opinion, and I'll be happy to read it. I'll show some characters here, I have more, but I don't want to give spoilers..."

"My English isn't that good, I speak Portuguese [BR]..."​

Cast Your Vote: The Protagonist's Mother - Who Takes the Crown?​

The Protagonist's Mother


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[-Bonk-]

Very Nice !! I'd lose the friend title and go with 3 different aged sisters personally, but either way.....i see those renders and sister in title i'm playing said game

 

[Myuhinny]

Site is English only and you need to provide translated text as well. Post has been edited. Looking at the MC and the bullies I'm guessing this is going to be a ntr game.

 

[iCheetos]

Very Nice !! I'd lose the friend title and go with 3 different aged sisters personally, but either way.....i see those renders and sister in title i'm playing said game

I'm glad you liked it , I'm trying to make my characters unique, you know, without the player looking at them and saying, 'Hmm, I've seen this character in another game.'

 

[iCheetos]

Site is English only and you need to provide translated text as well. Post has been edited. Looking at the MC and the bullies I'm guessing this is going to be a ntr game.

I wrote in English, maybe I accidentally used a translation, and no, the game will not be NTR...

 

[Nastastic]

Not bad.

Personally I think 18 year old MCs have been played out and you should make a dad/daughter game.

But that's what I always say.

I'm sure plenty of people will like your game.

 

[iCheetos]

Not bad.

Personally I think 18 year old MCs have been played out and you should make a dad/daughter game.

But that's what I always say.

I'm sure plenty of people will like your game.

Hmm , i played Dating my Daughter n i loved it ..

 

[WhiteVanDaycare]

Shows potential, keep us updated!

 

[AlfaBit]

"I'm making my first game, still learning how to use Daz and Renpy, and I'd like to know your honest opinion... What did you think of the renders, did they please you at first sight? Leave your opinion, and I'll be happy to read, I'll show you some characters here, I have more, but I don't want spoilers...

My English is not so good ha ha, I speak Portuguese [BR]...

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So your renders seems real fucking good but I don't like the mc, as @Nastastic said either make a dad daughter game (best setting) or at least age him up a little, shota/little mc isn't everyones cup of tea.

 

[Grodgiff]

All look great but the two bully char look like they are about to consume my soul or something...

 

[camo2ro]

Really good renders. They aren't similar to what we see most of the time, but the quality is really good. Will be waiting for more update on it

 

[SrMozaiko]

Very Nice!! keep us updated!

 

[NSFWobserver]

They're pretty good, but watch for clipping. The red hoodie is a pretty bad example of it TBH, and attention to that sort of detail can be pretty key if you want your art to come across as professional (and worth paying for) rather than amateur.

 

[alon]

looks really good! I hope to see more of this in the future

 

[Flaming1]

Pretty decent, I look forward to seeing what you do with them.

 

[johnman300]

These girls are cute! I see you didn't go with the bog standard DAZ model look. You've heavily modified them. Good choice. There's not much going on there as far as lighting as such. That'll help a bunch. Without good lighting renders tend to look "flat". If that makes sense. These are great looking models though.

 

[AsteriskMods]

The renders look good. If not related, I might suggest a little bit more variety in characters. If everybody has the same or similar hair colors, things start to feel a little same-y.

 

[NSFWobserver]

The renders look good. If not related, I might suggest a little bit more variety in characters. If everybody has the same or similar hair colors, things start to feel a little same-y.

Gotta agree with this. Even if I just looked at my own cousins, I'd have a wider variety of characters! In particular, there are too many slightly different shades of blond.

 

[Bolson]

These look very good! Congrats! Gotta be careful with the clipping though, in the first image the 2nd and 5th girls from left to right, and the MC, have their hands going through their clothes.

 

[Diallect]

"I'm making my first game, still learning how to use Daz and Renpy, and I'd like to know your honest opinion... What did you think of the renders, did they please you at first sight? Leave your opinion, and I'll be happy to read, I'll show you some characters here, I have more, but I don't want spoilers...

My English is not so good ha ha, I speak Portuguese [BR]...
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Everything looks very good, except for the fact that the MC's friend is very similar to himself, not that this is a problem, it just catches the eye
Really good work with the other characters though.