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3 Years of Service
If someone here is willing to make one, sure.
2 Years of Service
I have to do this because of the no ntr changes and I have to start the story over. But I think it will be better once I'm done. Game will have a lot of changed content at the beginning of the game and you won't be sorry I assure you.
2 Years of Service
Upcoming in TFSS (A New Beginning)
3 Years of Service
Lisa looking lovely and sexy as always, even from behind
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3 Years of Service
Why is it in the +Games, that they don't have a loli/shota
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Im thinking the same thing. And step sis? Get the hell out of G+
2 Years of Service
You comment without meaning. Play the game and then talk.
3 Years of Service
It had it previously so it's in the game+ section, but that content might return later once the story is caught back up to the previous older content.
2 Years of Service
Completely and utterly broken, with no pictures at all.
3 Years of Service
So far only the VN has the remake stuff the KN doesn't for those having missing images and stuff.
2 Years of Service
NO..... There is no way of other guys in the story with the girls/womaqn without some form of ntr when all the girls/woman are li's of the MC.
4 Years of Service
So I've finished this new version.
TL;DR: Fundamentally, I just don't understand why it's so important to show other people doing sexual things with the main girl instead of the MC, and why it's so important to treat the MC like shit right away. Alternatively, would this game fit your concept and orignal vision better if it was a female-protagonist game starring Lisa? Because that's kinda what it feels like it should have been given the events of this 0.1 so far. I mean, I'd dislike that, too, but that'd be a personal preference thing (I almost never like playing female protagonists).
This version still feels more frustrating than titillating. At least we don't have to sit through the descriptions of Lisa almost fucking/wanting to fuck Tony, and the MC is now much more unequivocally opposed to the idea of Lisa fucking Tony. As for the new Sonia stuff, I think I see where it's headed, but as it is, it's just frustrating. It's still someone else doing stuff with Lisa before the MC does, and it's someone Lisa is actively interfering with to prevent her from being with the MC. It also doesn't help that Sonia is, so far, the only proactive/assertive character who is actually deciding to do things and then making them happen.
So, the upside? This version does finally completely get rid of the MC wanting Tony to rail Lisa (and Lisa not actually objecting to the idea)... But the downside is that, in so doing, we lost all of the Lisa/MC lewd scenes from the old 0.1, so if we count Sonia's handjob of the MC as equivalent to Lisa's first handjob of the MC, we've lost: (1) Lisa swallowing MC's cum, (2) MC fingering Lisa, (3) Lisa kissing the MC, (4) Lisa giving the MC a more serious blowjob, (5) the MC going down on Lisa, (6) the MC deflowering Lisa, (7) the MC/Lisa shower sex, and (8) the MC fucking Lisa while they watch Elizabeth naked (note that some of this might have come after 0.1, but before 0.2 since it's all in the old Part 1 script). That is a LOT of scenes that got removed in favor of a scene of someone who isn't the MC kissing and going down on Lisa behind his back for Lisa's first cunnilingus.
I get wanting to slow things down; the old 0.1 did move at a breakneck pace... But this feels like very much the wrong way to do it for a game starring the MC. So far, ALL sexual contact that Lisa has had in this 0.1 is with someone who isn't the MC. Also so far, Sonia has done all of the following before the MC ever could: (1) kissed Lisa, (2) given Lisa an orgasm, (3) groped Lisa's breasts and had Lisa grope hers, and (4) given Lisa cunnilingus. At this point, I'm wondering if the MC will get to have ANY of Lisa's firsts, or if those are all being given to other people instead like the cunnilingus was?
I was one of the people calling for the removal of the 0.1 dialogue about both the MC and Lisa wanting to keep Lisa with Tony from the old 0.1 content, and even with that, I still feel disappointed by the changes when comparing what actually happens in this 0.1 to the old part 1. What we had before in the 0.1 was equivalent to receiving a lovely banquet of desserts but having it served with a glass of swamp muck we were required to drink before eating any of the food. What we have now is equivalent to smelling some delicious food that other people get to eat and we don't.
Personality-wise, Lisa also seems MUCH more prudish and selfish in the new version. She wants to stop the MC from being with Sonia (or anyone) while also not giving him any sexual attention or even hints/flirting, so it's like she's trying to force him to become an asexual toy for her to use when and if she ever becomes ready for it... And now she's also trying to take Sonia away from him by doing sexual things with her instead. Is Lisa supposed to be likable? Because so far, the new version really isn't. The old one was a lot more likable, even though she was so focused on wanting to do sexual things with Tony.
At least the new 0.1 MC is significantly better and doesn't give off the huge netorase/sharing vibes the old 0.1 MC did (i.e. no more thoughts about how hot Tony fucking Lisa would be, or about wanting Lisa to date guys who'd mess around with her and get her hot and bothered for when she came home), though now he's just a plain old normal cuckold (the two girls he likes are doing sexual stuff to each other behind his back, and neither is giving him anything beyond a pity handy.
So, the upside? This version does finally completely get rid of the MC wanting Tony to rail Lisa (and Lisa not actually objecting to the idea)... But the downside is that, in so doing, we lost all of the Lisa/MC lewd scenes from the old 0.1, so if we count Sonia's handjob of the MC as equivalent to Lisa's first handjob of the MC, we've lost: (1) Lisa swallowing MC's cum, (2) MC fingering Lisa, (3) Lisa kissing the MC, (4) Lisa giving the MC a more serious blowjob, (5) the MC going down on Lisa, (6) the MC deflowering Lisa, (7) the MC/Lisa shower sex, and (8) the MC fucking Lisa while they watch Elizabeth naked (note that some of this might have come after 0.1, but before 0.2 since it's all in the old Part 1 script). That is a LOT of scenes that got removed in favor of a scene of someone who isn't the MC kissing and going down on Lisa behind his back for Lisa's first cunnilingus.
I get wanting to slow things down; the old 0.1 did move at a breakneck pace... But this feels like very much the wrong way to do it for a game starring the MC. So far, ALL sexual contact that Lisa has had in this 0.1 is with someone who isn't the MC. Also so far, Sonia has done all of the following before the MC ever could: (1) kissed Lisa, (2) given Lisa an orgasm, (3) groped Lisa's breasts and had Lisa grope hers, and (4) given Lisa cunnilingus. At this point, I'm wondering if the MC will get to have ANY of Lisa's firsts, or if those are all being given to other people instead like the cunnilingus was?
I was one of the people calling for the removal of the 0.1 dialogue about both the MC and Lisa wanting to keep Lisa with Tony from the old 0.1 content, and even with that, I still feel disappointed by the changes when comparing what actually happens in this 0.1 to the old part 1. What we had before in the 0.1 was equivalent to receiving a lovely banquet of desserts but having it served with a glass of swamp muck we were required to drink before eating any of the food. What we have now is equivalent to smelling some delicious food that other people get to eat and we don't.
Personality-wise, Lisa also seems MUCH more prudish and selfish in the new version. She wants to stop the MC from being with Sonia (or anyone) while also not giving him any sexual attention or even hints/flirting, so it's like she's trying to force him to become an asexual toy for her to use when and if she ever becomes ready for it... And now she's also trying to take Sonia away from him by doing sexual things with her instead. Is Lisa supposed to be likable? Because so far, the new version really isn't. The old one was a lot more likable, even though she was so focused on wanting to do sexual things with Tony.
At least the new 0.1 MC is significantly better and doesn't give off the huge netorase/sharing vibes the old 0.1 MC did (i.e. no more thoughts about how hot Tony fucking Lisa would be, or about wanting Lisa to date guys who'd mess around with her and get her hot and bothered for when she came home), though now he's just a plain old normal cuckold (the two girls he likes are doing sexual stuff to each other behind his back, and neither is giving him anything beyond a pity handy.
TL;DR: Fundamentally, I just don't understand why it's so important to show other people doing sexual things with the main girl instead of the MC, and why it's so important to treat the MC like shit right away. Alternatively, would this game fit your concept and orignal vision better if it was a female-protagonist game starring Lisa? Because that's kinda what it feels like it should have been given the events of this 0.1 so far. I mean, I'd dislike that, too, but that'd be a personal preference thing (I almost never like playing female protagonists).
3 Years of Service
*reads the synopsis* Step-sister? Really? There's no Patreon anymore so why even pretend with step-crap? You're on SS, so might has well fully commit to your taboos and make her his real sister and make his cousins Kandy and Kitty 12-14yo's by default too. Stepcest just tends to annoy incest fans instead of making them horny.
3 Years of Service
Hell no don't weed wack it, if I wanted bald ones I'd just fuck a loli or something or play the other 99.9% of AVNs with bald pussies (so sick of those, a hairy pussy complete with flavor saver is a nice change for once). Don't like her bush = don't fap to it.
2 Years of Service
Yeh no.
Still:
Python:
[code]
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 432, in script
centered"This is the end of this part of the story. Thank you for playing this game and I hope you enjoyed it.
File "game/My_screens.rpy", line 142, in execute
File "game/My_screens.rpy", line 142, in execute
File "game/My_screens.rpy", line 146, in execute
File "game/My_screens.rpy", line 149, in execute
Exception: Imagebutton does not have a idle image. (auto=u'gui/buycoffe_%s.png').
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 432, in script
centered"This is the end of this part of the story. Thank you for playing this game and I hope you enjoyed it.
File "renpy/ast.py", line 921, in execute
renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 1373, in say
who(what, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/character.py", line 1266, in __call__
self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, dtt=dtt, **display_args)
File "renpy/character.py", line 930, in do_display
**display_args)
File "renpy/character.py", line 666, in display_say
rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
File "renpy/ui.py", line 299, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3377, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, pause_modal=pause_modal, **kwargs) # type: ignore
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3810, in interact_core
root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 582, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 582, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 582, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 451, in visit_all
callback(self)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3810, in <lambda>
root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 462, in per_interact
self.update()
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 653, in update
self.screen.function(**self.scope)
File "game/My_screens.rpy", line 142, in execute
File "game/My_screens.rpy", line 142, in execute
File "game/My_screens.rpy", line 146, in execute
File "game/My_screens.rpy", line 149, in execute
File "renpy/ui.py", line 952, in _imagebutton
idle = choice(idle, idle_image, "idle", required=True)
File "renpy/ui.py", line 946, in choice
raise Exception("Imagebutton does not have a %s image. (auto=%r)." % (name, auto))
Exception: Imagebutton does not have a idle image. (auto=u'gui/buycoffe_%s.png').
Windows-10-10.0.22621 AMD64
Ren'Py 7.5.3.22090809
The Five Star Stories
Mon Jul 8 18:50:09 20243 Years of Service
old version is better. With the rework instead of stealing your sis from Tony she basically just cockblocks you from the new girl by fucking her instead of MC so he gets nothing but a handjob so far.
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