discussion VN Ren'Py DAZ My New Father [v0.1.4.8 Preliminary] [Diego]

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Here's one. It's not great, but it should work. Just copy the game folder over and overwrite the files.

It's English only because of the translation, and that's all I can do. I also didn't thoroughly test it for misspellings or anything.

You'll also have to start a new game...

Thank you. The name change works. But for me, it forces me to play in spanish, even though english is selected.
*Update* after selecting my name, i just saved and then closed the game, then deleted the game folder. Upon rebooting, my name is still there and i can now play in English thanks again, cheers

 

[Nezron]

Writing needs some work, not that big of a deal.
Story is kind of odd, it this going to be a MC/loli game? or is this going to be a loli/lesbian game, because so far it looks like the loli/lesbian seems to be the direction the game is going. And lesbian is not even a tag.

Anyway the 'game' is way to early to have some sort of sinister plot development, there is not even any relationship with the MC yet.... I just hope the developer can figure out what the game will be....

 

[Moss]

Writing needs some work, not that big of a deal.
Story is kind of odd, it this going to be a MC/loli game? or is this going to be a loli/lesbian game, because so far it looks like the loli/lesbian seems to be the direction the game is going. And lesbian is not even a tag.

Anyway the 'game' is way to early to have some sort of sinister plot development, there is not even any relationship with the MC yet.... I just hope the developer can figure out what the game will be....

Lesbian tag is there now.

 

[Vlbc]

Can someone tell me if the Mc is the bad guy, good guy or we can choose?
(i really don't like rape) '-'

 

[cirdon]

@Diego you really need an English speaking proof-reader. You're frequently getting the gender wrong which is jarring and takes me out of the story.

 

[Galat]

@Diego you really need an English speaking proof-reader. You're frequently getting the gender wrong which is jarring and takes me out of the story.

Does that still happen? Thanks for mentioning it, I'll try to figure it out.

 

[Moss]

Does that still happen? Thanks for mentioning it, I'll try to figure it out.

Also the command button should say “quit” not “ go out” or whatever it says now.

 

[SerjSerger]

Not sure if this can call a game. More like bugged and half way done alpha...

 

[Galat]

Can someone tell me if the Mc is the bad guy, good guy or we can choose?
(i really don't like rape) '-'

The mc won't do those things! If you open some extreme, but optional content.

 

[Galat]

Not sure if this can call a game. More like bugged and half way done alpha...

Thanks for comment!

 

[Galat]

Writing needs some work, not that big of a deal.
Story is kind of odd, it this going to be a MC/loli game? or is this going to be a loli/lesbian game, because so far it looks like the loli/lesbian seems to be the direction the game is going. And lesbian is not even a tag.

Anyway the 'game' is way to early to have some sort of sinister plot development, there is not even any relationship with the MC yet.... I just hope the developer can figure out what the game will be....

-Lesbian content is minimal throughout the story.

-The story is mostly already planned out, don't worry about that.

-I am aware that I am not the best writer.

-The first part is from Sofia's vision and then it goes to Marcus's vision.

 

[Lazy Stinger]

Aw.
This is a winner. I love to see the history develop... And it would be fun to see if the girl
have a younger sister in the future. Hint hint. Nudge nudge....

 

[AndyOTR]

There is a small bug. When I try to take a screenshot (S key), the game crashes.

Does that still happen?

In the screenshot and several places after that.

 

[Lazy Stinger]

There is a small bug. When I try to take a screenshot (S key), the game crashes.


In the screenshot and several places after that.

Oh.
She looks very awake to me. I dunno about the error.... But it seems shes ready for dick.

 

[Galat]

I think the loli tag is out of place here since there is no loli here. But there are 18-20+ looking girls with huge asses that some will like (they look good, but I prefer the skinny ones).


Yes, just don’t forget that many are here for certain adult content, and not for kilometers of text about supermen/mafia/gangster from children’s fairy tales -) I mean, don't make the same mistakes as Seath at TheGuardian.

If the goal is to do something like "Tessa", that would be great. But preferably with a loli, i.e. with real ones (with small body proportions).
But these are only wishes and unnecessary advice to anyone, so you can safely ignore them and do as you want.

I differ a lot with the age range.

I didn't play guardian or tessa.

Sofia's first model was a little smaller, I made a comparison.

 

[Galat]

Are interested in a Sofia with smaller proportions?

 

[Kalenz]

Why is the restricted tag now in German?

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[Galat]

Why is the restricted tag now in German?

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No idea, I understand that a vote was held in the discord, but I am not part of the lewdcorner discord

 

[Staystrong]

Work smart not hard people. Some tips for better online content is easier than ever, with AI generation. Using it to translate dialogue is great, and much better than google translate or anything else. Also for dialogue in general its amazing if you know how to word your gpt prompts. Such as lets pretend im a VN artist for Ancient Mesopotamia and can't dialogue to save my life. (Like most VN author's AMIRITE friends?)
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Example dialogue line: Basic VN author text:
"Hey, you got some sicks body on you, sexy lady. Would your cuming to my place to fack and sock please? Do it now you dumb hore."
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Same line, just reworked as a cuck who is basically asking for sex: My version of women pleasing dialogue.

"Not sure if the curves on that phat ass are real or if its just 3D generation from a Gen 10 model, but you are without a doubt sexy. If you got time, I would love to talk to you about Neo liberal left wing Feminist movement, and the implications of the middle east Feminists wearing burkas. We could cuddle by candlelight, I respect you and you're femininity."
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Chat gpts dialogue for a prompt as such: Chatgpt, I need dialogue of a fictional character defined as such - confident male mid 20s trying to impress a lady at the bar in under 150 words. And here is chatGPT response:
"Hey there, I couldn't help but notice your smile from across the room. Mind if I join you? I'm Alex, by the way. I was drawn in by your energy—it's infectious. You know, this place can get a bit noisy, but talking to you feels like the perfect melody. So, what brings someone as captivating as you to a place like this tonight? I'm genuinely intrigued. Oh, and by the way, your taste in [beverage/food] is impeccable. I was just thinking, if the stars align, maybe we could share a more intimate conversation somewhere quieter. What do you say?"

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ALSO PLEASE START USING GPT FOR TRANSLATIONS ITS SO MUCH BETTER THAN ANYTHING ELSE.
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Translate whats inside the brackets into Spanish:
7 months for like 135 renders? This is going to be finished by 2030 and the AI singularity. Maybe then you will be able to finish this with some AI help. And honestly, why don't people who aren't native english use some common sense, and this applies to english VN authors too, get chat gpt, speak the dialogue in your native tongue, then ask chat gpt to "VERBATIM translate this dialog into *PLACE LANGUAGE HERE*. Or better yet, use chat gpt to make more fluid sounding dialogue. My biggest peeve, is hearing dialogue you would never ever fucking hear IRL. Just some thoughts.
Here is a direct example of using chat gpt translation.
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Traduce lo que está dentro de los corchetes al español:
[ 7 meses para como 135 renders? Esto va a estar terminado para el 2030 y la singularidad de la IA. Tal vez entonces podrás terminar esto con ayuda de la IA. Y honestamente, ¿por qué la gente que no habla inglés nativo no usa un poco de sentido común, y esto se aplica también a los autores de VN en inglés, obtengan ChatGPT, hablen el diálogo en su lengua materna, luego pidan a ChatGPT que. "VERBATIM traduzca este diálogo al *IDIOMA AQUÍ*. O mejor aún, utilicen ChatGPT para hacer un diálogo que suene más fluido. Mi mayor molestia es escuchar diálogos que nunca escucharías en la vida real. Solo son algunas reflexiones. Aquí tienes un ejemplo directo de usar la traducción de ChatGPT. ]

 

[Galat]

I prefer to write my own story

Chatgpt is already used since 1.3.0