discussion VN KN Ren'Py DAZ The Five Star Stories [v0.9.0] [Narrator Studios]

[The Narrator]

Allow others to update?

1. yes

Developer Name

The Narrator

Developer Links

BuyMeACoffee - Boosty - Itch.io - x.com

Version

v0.9.0

Latest Update

Jun 3, 2025

Release Date

Nov 27, 2023

Language

English

OS

1. Windows
2. Linux
3. MacOS

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Overview:​

In this game you are a teenage boy who becomes interested in his step-sister and starts spying on her for a while. You can't blame him, she's a sexy teenager with a shapely body and a gorgeous face who spends most of her time in a skimpy swimsuit. You have a special bond with her and spend most of your time at the pool with her. He never thought it would be anything more than spying. For him it's just a good way to see some tits, ass and pussy on a regular basis. After getting so many blue balls just from staring at her beautiful young body, he gets the oportunity to meet her friend who tries to seduce him, but his stepsister gets jealous and tries to stop their relationship from happening. From there, your horizons will open up and new opportunities will come your way.
This game even has a patch that brings back some memories from the past after an accident that you don't remember and that your family is hiding from you for your own good.​

Spoiler: Genre:

3dcg, animated, creampie, female protagonist, handjob, incest, kinetic novel, lesbian, male protagonist, masturbation, multiple protagonist, oral sex, pregnancy, sex toys, teasing, vaginal sex, virgin

Spoiler: Installation

1. Extract and run.

Spoiler: Change-Log

v0.9.0
Visuals: The full game has about 2000 images (New 217 QHD)
Animation: 123 hot animations (New 10)
Script: 98,664 total words
v0.8.5
-180 New Images
-5 new animations from multiple angles
-The game contains 5,835 dialogue tiles with 96,432 words.
New option

-Walkthrough Enable/Disable from Mod
v0.8.0
214 New Images
6 new animations from multiple angles
v0.7.2 Bugfix
Fixed a bug in the Kinetic Novel that caused you to be prompted to see the content of the smols.
Fixed a bug in the Visaul novel that caused a "smols" error to appear.
Save File Director bug fix
In order to see the contents of this update, you'll need to replay the v0.7.0 version.
v0.7.2
134 New renders
5 New animations
Gallery
v0.7
139 New renders
2 New animations
The full game contains:
5,241 lines of dialogue
1551 images
v0.1-Fix - A New Beginning
KN bug fixed
v0.1 - A New Beginning
198 New renders
1 New animations
v0.6
280 New renders
7 New animations
The game contains 4,643 dialog lines, 1304 pictures and 71 animations.
v0.5 Bugfix
New options:
Now you can change the text font and text box in Preferences
New website where you can support this game
Fixed:
Some bugs where the pregnancy bar was not filling
Lots of spelling and grammar changes
v0.5
303 New renders + patch included
22 New animations
The game contains 3,520 dialog lines, 1234 pictures and 66 animations.
v0.4
167 New Renders
3 New animations
New option:
Change characters name in MOD
New Background music
Replay Galery
Change songs directly from MOD
Extra content
v0.3.1
Several spelling mistakes fixed.
v0.3
238 New Renders
1117 text lines
5 New animations
All images and animations have been reworked
New option:
Change characters name and age
Visual novel with choices
Character Info menu
Characters have influence and affinity points
Characters can get pregnant
Background music
v0.2
92 New Renders
964 Total text lines
2 New animations
New option:
Change in-game Name
Part 1/2
121 images
1 animations
527 text lines
Developer note
s:

About me
I read a lot of stories on the internet and I wanted to see some action, not just imagine it. Since I couldn't do it with real characters, I thought about doing it with virtual ones.
So I worked hard for a few months to learn how to create and render 3D scenes. I finally did it and made a visual novel. I'm very proud of myself and I hope you like it.
I decided to make this game by taking inspiration from the best stories on the internet and using my imagination.
So if you like a good story, you've come to the right place.

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[JGNeon]

Wow! That was hot! The visuals were great, but the dev needs to put some more work into the code. A few pointers for the dev:

• Although this is a KN, it should be simple code work to let you choose the names of both main characters, if you want to change them from their defaults, to make the story more "personal" (from the reader's point of view).
  • Mostly, this is just by
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    and using a simple variable reference; I've provided some example code below.
  • If you do this, be careful to not use a blind search-and-replace, especially since the word "jack" is also used as the verb, in addition to the narrator's name.
• Some lines where Lisa was talking, were attributed to Jack, so these need to be fixed. I'd also suggest having an "outsider" (either a friend, or someone you know might be interested in this type of story) playtest the story, to look for typos or other dialogue errors, visual issues, etc. Could even be a stranger on a forum somewhere, as long as it's not you, just so you can a second set of eyes; when you work on a project, you can easily miss non-obvious issues.
• A different style should be used for the narrator's thoughts, the *** bits before and after the text looks a bit messy. Adding a new "character" with the name of "Jack's thoughts" (or with the changed name); I've included some example code below.

So, I did some tinkering around, and here are some example code for my suggestions.

For script.rpy:

define l = Character("[Lisa]")
define j = Character("[Jack]")
define jt = Character("[Jack]'s thoughts",what_prefix="{i}",what_suffix="{/i}")

This is in the block where you've defined your characters. This will define jt as a "speakable" character representing Jack's internal thoughts, this will also ensure that this character's "spoken" text will be stylized with italics.

Spoiler: Example differences

As for Myvirginsister.rpy (the first story in what I assume is going to be some sort of anthology), here's some example code to put right after the introduction, but before going into the story itself:

python:
    Jack=renpy.input("Enter the name of the male main character (leave blank for Jack):", with_none="Jack").strip()
    if not Jack:
        Jack="Jack"
    Lisa=renpy.input("Enter the name of the female main character (leave blank for Lisa):", with_none="Lisa").strip()
    if not Lisa:
        Lisa="Lisa"

This will define the variable containing the name of the two main characters, and setting their default if text was left blank. The strip() function will strip whitespaces before and after, just so it will handle if you input spaces as their names instead of actual text.

Then, in the script lines themselves, replace "Jack" with "[Jack]" and "Lisa" with "[Lisa]" - this is one of the most simple ways to do this.

 

[JGNeon]

Then again, I don't know if this story's dev is actually in this forum at all, so my suggestions might've gone silently into the ether...

 

[Nastastic]

Another faux-shota game where the male is shorter than the female despite being the (exact) same age. Maybe it's the heels and they're actually the same height...but he should probably be taller even with the heels, hence the shota vibe.

 

[Tripod70]

Something you can ( If he ever comes here to LC ) is this to lighten up the text box to not be in the way..

Just drop in the "Game" folder. Then in Preferences adjust the Textbox Opacity to about 15% or to your own taste.

This is from another game, and tested here to work right.

 

[kibasnowpaw]

Hey, my name is Kiba Snowpaw. I've been gaming since the 80s, so I want to give my input based on my experience.

I know this is only an Alpha at best, so where do I begin with this? Let's see... If you want your game to kick off, I don't agree with you about taking out choices, since it's one of the things that makes it a game. Now, it just feels like a silent film from the 1920s, just in 3D and colored. The story, I guess, is fine but needs more personality to it, and also more 3D animations so it's not only the sex scenes that have it.

Also, I feel like the characters look a little too much like dolls for my liking, and then they need voices. I haven't checked the code side, and I'm not a coder, so I can't really say anything about that. Also, having *** *** as 'what am I doing' feels like I'm reading a story without visualization. Besides that, it's a fine standard game, not one I would pay for as it is now, but still a fine game.

 

[hansdampf788]

MC looks

 

[hawaii]

I played it. Good new start, but too much narrative factor. Please leave it as a role play of a novella. If it continues like this with incest love, then it has the makings of a good game. Keep it up !!!!

 

[Jorund]

Just a headsup: not sure if it is fixed here already (doesn't look like it) but Dev made a mistake with the uploads and provided a version with missing files (happened on another forum just now, Dev confirmed). Pixeldrain should be the right version with 759 mb but others with 724 seem to be missing files.

 

[Tripod70]

Just a headsup: not sure if it is fixed here already (doesn't look like it) but Dev made a mistake with the uploads and provided a version with missing files (happened on another forum just now, Dev confirmed). Pixeldrain should be the right version with 759 mb but others with 724 seem to be missing files.

Yes ... Waiting for the fix to be uploaded

 

[icecold]

Something you can ( If he ever comes here to LC ) is this to lighten up the text box to not be in the way..

Just drop in the "Game" folder. Then in Preferences adjust the Textbox Opacity to about 15% or to your own taste.

This is from another game, and tested here to work right.

Just put the file in another game that anoyed me with to dark textbox, and no way to adjust it. Worked like a charm. Dont understand why the devs dont use that more. Thank you.

 

[User_48642]

Just a headsup: not sure if it is fixed here already (doesn't look like it) but Dev made a mistake with the uploads and provided a version with missing files (happened on another forum just now, Dev confirmed). Pixeldrain should be the right version with 759 mb but others with 724 seem to be missing files.

Yes ... Waiting for the fix to be uploaded

Added links for the fixed version.

Mac / Compressed / Android versions were built using the PC one.

 

[Tripod70]

Added links for the fixed version.

Mac / Compressed / Android versions were built using the PC one.

Thanks just about to do it just got them here: Slow I know...

 

[Nicest_Incest]

Incest (and incoming loli cousin to fuck in future updates) + Patreon only = this probably won't last long. Aside from that I busted 3-4 fat nuts in the twin sister and yet her pregancy risk bar still hasn't moved, so thinking that's bugged too. Also her and the mom scissor in the shower so some might call that NTR (even when from a story stand point it's necessry if you want to eventually fuck your mom too I'm guessing).

 

[The Narrator]

Another faux-shota game where the male is shorter than the female despite being the (exact) same age. Maybe it's the heels and they're actually the same height...but he should probably be taller even with the heels, hence the shota vibe.

She is a little taller than him with the heels on, but I changed that in the latest releases. It was an innocent mistake on my part.

 

[The Narrator]

I played it. Good new start, but too much narrative factor. Please leave it as a role play of a novella. If it continues like this with incest love, then it has the makings of a good game. Keep it up !!!!

The game has changed a lot. Now you can play it with choices, and you get a lot of them.

 

[The Narrator]

Incest (and incoming loli cousin to fuck in future updates) + Patreon only = this probably won't last long. Aside from that I busted 3-4 fat nuts in the twin sister and yet her pregancy risk bar still hasn't moved, so thinking that's bugged too. Also her and the mom scissor in the shower so some might call that NTR (even when from a story stand point it's necessry if you want to eventually fuck your mom too I'm guessing).

I fixed that, the pregnant bar will move. Now you can choose if you want to get them pregnant or not.

 

[-Bonk-]

mmm.....delicious sister. I hope the blonde jungle gets weed whacked, only thing that turned me off a bit. Great game never the less. Great work Narrator, now to check update

 

[The Narrator]

mmm.....delicious sister. I hope the blonde jungle gets weed whacked, only thing that turned me off a bit. Great game never the less. Great work Narrator, now to check update

Thank you very much for your appreciation. You guys are making me want to keep doing this.

 

[-Bonk-]

Wow , just played update......Hot !! Ohhhh little cousin, love her. So much potential here, sky is the limit. Only one thing kind of threw me a bit. She seems to be pure, innocent and naive however some of the dialogue doesn't line up with that personality. Still love her though. Keep up the great work !!!