1/3
3 Years of Service
LoML does seem to get an odd amount of hate, I kinda like the models. My one complaint with it is sometimes feels a bit rambly and they could use some editing![]()
The last chapter was the first one where I kept catching myself thinking: "Naughtyroad should have had an editor here"
Up until then the rambling was just pulled back in time, so, good writing skills. ( And he is without doubt a very skilled writer/storyteller)
So, yes, agree on the last chapter.