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makaab

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Lament Entertainment
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0.083 Preview
Latest Update
Sep 14, 2022
Release Date
Jul 25, 2022
Language
English
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Overview:
It's been a long time, since you have had any contact with your mother and sister.
After a decade of separation, you have graduated from high school, and are moving to the picturesque town
of Hollowbrook, to be reunited.
You have a lot of questions about the past, and a lot to learn about the present.
With your sister Erica's help, you'll uncover the mysteries that subtly shroud the town
of Hollowbrook, meet a cast of quirky characters, and find answers to some of your own personal
questions along the way.
But beware...
Something sinister lurks...

Welcome..to Hollowbrook.



Incest
Nudity
Lesbian
Oral Sex
Horror
Comedy
Violence
Teen
Tween
Initial Release
Fixed grammar
Added sounds/music
Fixed age screens
Added 3 scenes from upcoming update
Introduced 3 new characters

This is a slow burn story.
There will be sex, but the activity will ramp up.
Also, there is no tween tag so I had to use Loli.
also nudity
panties
comedy




If you have played the alpha supporter version,
There is no need to download this.

DOWNLOAD
Windows PC/Linux
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* This unofficial port/version is not released by developer, download at your own risk.
Android (0.05beta)


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SeveredRealms

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No tags, developer name, os systems listed and more. please preview other posted games and edit your accordingly before we can approve it. Thanks
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makaab

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hmm, i filled all of that out before. idk what happened. now I cant see where to add tags. fml
 

Crowley

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No tags, developer name, os systems listed and more. please preview other posted games and edit your accordingly before we can approve it. Thanks
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its cause i moved threads from games to restricted, unless this game is on f95 but im 80% positive its not.
 

makaab

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Ive never even tried to put it on f95 lol
 

Crowley

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Ive never even tried to put it on f95 lol
i mean you can try but you dont have age restricting code inplace not to restrict anything under 18 years old, ie i can set the age to anything under 18 + the loli tag may piss someone off on f95.
 

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This is a gorgeous beginning. I actually found myself reading and interested. Well done. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
 

makaab

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Thanks guys.
I kind of worry that my writing isnt smutty enough and that its a bit too different compared to other games. hearing your replies is a relief. thanks..

alsothank you greybourn
 

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Ill check with my coder to see if its possible. Im not sure if thats built into renpy or not. i dont remember. but i will ask. and will let you know.
it should be
 

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A very good start!

What kind of machine are you using for your awesome renders? The beginning scene looks almost like a movie it is so realistic! Very very good work.

A couple of things about the writing. It is done rather well with unique characters. I would say that the MC probably wouldn't know the word "Dandy" (as in the perjorative slang usage version) since it is typically something only older people either know or say. Having said that it is nice to see creative language used.

Also the MC looks like he is either a Hanson brother.. oom bop. Or a rebel of some sort. Interesting look and choice. It is a little disconnecting when we see his face, hair, and eye lashes (looks like Maybelline) because he looks like a girl. Straight up girl with short hair. He is told "your all grown up now" ... and he looks like he's 12. He is even called "a piece of man meat" ... which is very out of character for his effeminate look. It keeps popping me out of immersion.

Your actual female renders look very good! The sister is put together well and her character is interesting right from the start.

Overall very good renders with an engaging story. Favorite characters are the 2 smols. The preview of the new characters looks like it is heading in F95 direction.

Good luck.
 

makaab

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A very good start!

What kind of machine are you using for your awesome renders? The beginning scene looks almost like a movie it is so realistic! Very very good work.

A couple of things about the writing. It is done rather well with unique characters. I would say that the MC probably wouldn't know the word "Dandy" (as in the perjorative slang usage version) since it is typically something only older people either know or say. Having said that it is nice to see creative language used.

Also the MC looks like he is either a Hanson brother.. oom bop. Or a rebel of some sort. Interesting look and choice. It is a little disconnecting when we see his face, hair, and eye lashes (looks like Maybelline) because he looks like a girl. Straight up girl with short hair. He is told "your all grown up now" ... and he looks like he's 12. He is even called "a piece of man meat" ... which is very out of character for his effeminate look. It keeps popping me out of immersion.

Your actual female renders look very good! The sister is put together well and her character is interesting right from the start.

Overall very good renders with an engaging story. Favorite characters are the 2 smols. The preview of the new characters looks like it is heading in F95 direction.

Good luck.
thank you for all of the feedback.
on the MC, he was seperated from mom and sis when he was 8 so at 18, hes going to look grown to anybody that knew him at that age.
also, part of the upcoming story involves a barbershop location, haircut and a new character. probably in the update after next.

as for tghe lashes, i didnt even think to notice that they were longer. Ill see about shortening them.
there will be more girls added as the story goes on. Im trying to add different characters for a plethora of tastes.
Also, Erica is my own personal favorite as well.
thanks again for checking it out, and I hope I can keep you interested.
 

makaab

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ok, thank you Crowley. I'll look into that soon.
 

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Here's my unofficial android port of Ravenous v0.083 Preview

Download

Swipe Down - Hide Ui

Swipe Left - Rollback

Swipe Right - Start Skipping Text

Swipe Up - Save Your Game

Swipe Up and Down - Enable Auto Forward Mode

Opacity Slider and Text Size Scaling on Preferences


All saves are located on Documents > Cebs

..::GRANT PERMISSION ON FIRST RUN::..
 
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