discussion Game outline

[zakarmmusa832]

Had an idea bouncing around my head that I thought I would outline into a structure. Not sure if It'll ever get made - but also happy for a DAZ artist who needs a story (if they even like it) to take it and run with it too. Posting here to collect my thoughts, take any feedback, and hopefully get a solid outline that makes dev a lot easier.

Broad goals -

• Have the prologue essentially be a preference checklist and make the game support a incest and or loli patch to make the game as easy to get on patreon/subscribestar as possible. Basically the prologue would present you with a few options that would flag whether you wanted loli, pretend that the hebe is 18, and or incest options (otherwise remove blood, and even step relations).
• The goal there is to help things keep monetised (cause time and hardware is expensive), whilst also make the fine folks here have the options they want (and the game would be designed as if you probably want all of it.
• Also goal is to have every chapter have some decent lewd content - none of this "nothing happens for 3 chapter" rubbish. Whilst choices "matter" in this, they're more just switches for access to certain content - everything will be written with a relationship with the sister and daughter as core with extras on top. Once again, this is largely a "allowed on platforms" thing.
• I also wanted a full outline (subject to change of course) so the damn thing has some direction rather than some of the aimless rambling stories that keep going off in random tangents.

What it is and isnt:

• Designed for incest, and a fairly even range of age girls if you know what I mean, with maybe only one older person, maybe two, but they're minor players. Personally, not looking at flat chest for any (jussstt budded), or huge breasts (realistic DD maybe at most, smaller is better, but maybe JUST enough for a titjob ;]) - but if another dev picks it up, no control from me there.
• No plans for NTR - though maybe a little bit of housewife action as an option, but definitely not a main part, just a thing to drive one part of the story.

I will reserve the next couple of posts for outline and more detailed scripting. Any feedback welcome! Trying to appeal to a wide audience, not just one crowd.

 

[zakarmmusa832]

Cast:
MC 30ish - IT (accessing phones/laptops will be a thing) teacher after prologue. - Player choice
Sister/not step sister (dependent on choice) 14/15 in prologue visually early 20s later but canonically 30ish - referred to as S from here - Skyler?
S's daughter (might be MCs too depending on choices) - D from now on - Suzie?
Cousin - 13ish, C from now on - Caitlin?
Aunt 40? - new principal at school MC teaches at - travels away or gets MC to babysit semi-regularly - Alana?
Friend of D - F 15/16 - fears mothers wrath for bad grades - Faith?
F's Mother 30-40? - could be a friend of D or C1s mother, FM from here - wants F to get better grades, will do whatever to make it happen - Maggie?

Rough Outline - this will need a bunch of story fleshing out - this is more the relationship outline and broad strokes to make that progress.3


Prologue:

• Story: When MC is 15yo, parents are splitting -
• MC spies on S, S spies on him
• things happen (choices - but ends with unknown pregnancy) before they lose contact
• Maybe some flashbacks pending choices

PART 1 - Setting up all the relationship - get some lewd in, but maybe no sex because gotta keep coming back for more!

Ch 1 - Establishing:

• Story: MC Is IT teacher at school and S is about to come back into his life
• 15 years later
• FM willing to give favours or sell off daughter (F) for favours - if F is sold off, FM can use as blackmail (also have tutor alternative for no blackmail same result)
• Install spyware on phone/laptop optional (basically just nice little selfies or video moments)
• Intro C and A
• C asks why MC doesnt do things A does with boys
• C says she watches sometimes and says she wishes MC wasnt lonely and wonders why boys don't want to spend time with her like they do with mom.
• MC jerks to video of S (she did for money to get by) unaware of who she is and thinks she looks familiar
• S moves back to town and D goes to school (MC unaware who she is)
• Aunt finds out and asks MC to give S and D somewhere to live - MC realises S was in videos

Ch 2 - Our new life:

• Story: New dynamics, helping with new business
• Settle in to new life with S and D - unaware that D is daughter (if incest)
• Animosity from S if incest choice was made
• S starts cafe? store of some kind anyway - MC offers to help with IT - spyware optional for S
• C asks if S will keep MC company - explain family, C thinks family is ok because they love you
• D becomes friends with F - sport?
• Accidentally walk in on shower of S or D

Ch 3 - Things begin to change:

• Story: School things, discussing with A how things are going with S, Helping with business
• If tutor choice made - F optionally seduces MC, D spies?
• D & F discuss attractiveness of MC
• MC help with bakery smooths things over with S, maybe some touching and discussions of when kids - maybe a flashback?
• MC walks in on whichever he didn't last time
• Looks at vids of S to release, D spies

Ch 4 - First encounters (Ch 4 or 5 could be switched depending on preference for D or S - they'll both happen it's just which is first).

• Story: Mostly just interactions to get to all the bits this time
• D sneaks into MCs bedroom at night and goes down on him, cum in mouth, on face, or over hand optional
• MC makes decisions - no sex this time round. D currently aware MC is father if incest. Uses it to playfully blackmail for new phone
• MC buys D new phone - spyware optional
• A asks MC to babysit C whilst she goes out on a date
• C wears not a lot around house
• MC jerks off in bathroom imagining C - C spies

Ch 5 - Discovery

• Story: FM might do some blackmail, MC might hear of teacher getting fired for fooling around with student
• MC conflicted around age of girls he's getting involved in and goes back to vid of S
• S walks in on him as he cums
• Talk about it and why she made videos - MC says he'll take care of them now
• S reminisces about when they lived together, considers telling him about D relationship
• MC checks spyware for selfies/vids - probably from F to keep that going.

Ch 6 - Let loose

• Story: Mostly interactions and backstory fleshing out
• D has sleepover at F house - some lesbian scenes
• S and MC decide to drink together, maybe play a drinking game or poker that becomes strip poker
• Leads to touching, BJ
• Talk about missing each other and that it shouldn't happen again (lol - you know it will)

Ch 7 - Babysitting

• Story: Babysitting shennanigans
• MC babysits for A again
• C proposes some games which involve wrestling and ticking
• She wears loose singlet and skirt so lots of flashing (on purpose)
• MC goes for shower thinking about it (and is hard)
• C calls out urgently for help before MC finishes and he rushes out naked to find her masturbating lying on table
• She takes photo of him naked and says she'll tell A unless she does what she tells him to.
• Demands he throat f*ck her while she lies on table playing with herself (you know the one, lying on back with head back).
• Option to cum in mouth, face, or body
• End of part 1 now that everyone is set up and the players probably want to get to the sex.

PART 2 - Ok lets get to the sex and maybe have some more story stuff. MC starts to take back some control.

Ch 8 - Caught! Again!

• S has to work late so asks MC to look after D
• Dinner, watch some TV, talk loop, some unintended flashing, you know the drill
• Optional peek on D in bedroom changing, she notices, but MC thinks he gets away with it
• If spyware, then choice of who to look at, looking at D changes interaction as she peeks in on him and notices.
• D walks in and if it was her MC was looking at goes down the “real thing is better” line of dialogue, otherwise, “let me show you how I’m better”
• Few different positions
• If not ended after 3? positions, S comes home and D has to hide in closet.
• S comes in, finishes MC off while D watches, then leaves
• D does a “our little secret dialogue” then sneaks out
• S sees D entering bedroom naked, tells her she should put clothes on if she’s going to the bathroom it’s not just them living by themselves anymore

Ch 9 - What am I doing?

• MC has a crisis of conscience about if he's doing the wrong thing
• Looks at spyware and considers deleting it all before he gets caught - if loli path the following: finds video of F riding dildo when younger
• C comes up from behind, looks over his shoulder and says something about "liking them younger like her"
• Says he can use her to get tension out. sex from behind against table as he lifts her up off the ground (feet dangling)
• Says MC should buy her a phone so she can help any time
• if non loli, F walks in for tutoring, sits next to MC, notices bulge, leg touching, unzips, BJ, then sits on so skirt is covering up and rides.
• Just after either option is finished, A walks in, nearly catching.

Ch 10 - Stereotypical holiday scene

• S suggests go to a cabin on a lake and bring all the girls along
• General shennanigans, one on one scenes with each, bikini slips, pussy grinding underwater,
• S wants to get reconnected and slips into shower for sex scene
• In evening, everyone dressed skimpy, playing games before evening comes around.

Ch 11 - Two at once?

• In the middle of the night, D and F come in for fun with MC, few options then they leave
• Has dream about D comes back, starts riding and S walks in - and then shouts about that being her (or if incest path) your daughter (foreshadowing)
• MC then wakes up and realises it was a dream, but if incest, wonders why he dreamt that.
• Cook breakfast, chatting, nip slips, S sits next to him and gives some rubs
• Give C old phone when she gets dropped off.

Ch 12 - S & D go away (just for a bit)

• S & D need to go back to sort out unfinished business
• MC helps take care of the shop in the meantime
• C comes to help in the shop as his "little helper"
• You know how this goes
• Maybe a BJ scene whilst MC is behind counter trying to serve someone

Ch 13 - D comes back early

• MC and D spend evening together - this is all obvious what happens
• D finds spyware (or at the very least, a texted photo) of C if loli, but F if not
• Confronts him, says that he already knows she's willing to share
• End up with agreement

Ch 14 - S finds out

• S comes back - grateful to MC for taking care of D and shop
• Have nice evening all together - new little family vibes
• S slips into shower with MC
• That evening D sneaks into MC room for HJ ("Do I do it better than mummy?")
• S walks in right as MC cums on D's face
• "that's my/your daughter!" depending on incest choice.
• end of part 2. Because Cliffhangers are a thing.

Part 3 - All comes to a head. (This will be fleshed out properly given time)

Ch 15 - Aftermath

• Broadly, D gets S on board

Ch 16 - C gets involved

• C finds out, and uhhh this will be a better chapter if you choose loli ha.

Ch 17 - The last babysit

• Babysit shennanigans - flesh out with spyware just in case people didn't choose loli

Ch 18 - A finds out (shit gets dark, not a lot of lewd

• A either walking in on MC and C, or sees pictures on MC work computer then either way, confrontation at A/C house, runs out to tell police - then gets hit by a car

Ch 19 - The funeral

• It's a funeral... it's messed up... but maybe some making people happier - but also C gets inheritence, MC gets custody

Ch 20 - The move

• Move away from town because shits getting real, set up shop (figuratively and literally) in small town

Ch 21 - The new life

• Wrap it up!

The End

 

[zakarmmusa832]

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