Its not supposed to be public yet. I do have it as he sent it to me to test.
My initial reaction to the version I tested as posted on his discord. King Jim (Severed Realms): Ok interesting start to the game but I have to ask is there sharing / ntr coming? I see to many other guys in the start doing stuff with other girls. Son fantasizing about the mom/ wife of mc. another kid with his mother and the kid in the car with his mother. The redhead in another car. then the strip club owners blowjob and the mc knowing the girl. then the two daughters of the mc and his partner walking in ready to fuck who ever the owner says? all red flags for me and not knowing your story or your planned tags it would prob be a game i would avoid and any anti ntr folks will have a field day just with the prologe you sent me.
you do need a good english proof reader and a spell checker. I saw many instances of typos wrong word used etc.