I don't know what it is but the dialog is what killed it for me. If it was a translation job, it was a poor one. If not, then it needs some serious rework. It is all over the place and makes it very hard to follow a single conversation.
I prefer it with no voice acting. I can read so much faster than the voices so I skip most of it anyway. Now having sex sounds like moans and such during those scenes are acceptable imo.
As AlBetGam mentioned, there isn't enough information. What laws are currently in place? What is illegal and what isn't? Is it a rich country? Poor country? Even with the little extra information you gave, its still not enough to make a truly informed decision in order to change something...