you know this story could have been ok without trying to put some Inc....t in it i 'm actually using it without and so far with just a couple of lines retouched it would be perfect
ok i won't complain about the shortness since its a first release but the storytelling is messy it jumps from scene to scene without warning start narrating stories about new characters without any background to them and i'm pretty sure it timeskips without indicting so either in 4 words...
i found a weird hole in the story when i arrive at the beach Del tells Beth that she and i have started doing things but the last time we spoe i just grounded her and she was mad at me is there a part of the story missing??
english needs work and you should put the music and other noises on two different track so we can mute the music and keep de rest of the audio the music is annoying aside from that it look good though if your gonna makke it a grind fest your gonna lose some fans