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This scene makes no sense. She looks 18 but acts like she's 12.
Edit: If you're gonna have custom ages, don't contradict those ages by referring to the girls as adults.
Decided to try it out to see for myself.
The AI slop is completely unnecessary, and the images don't even fit the characters. The backstory can be told just fine without them. Especially unnecessary to tell the backstory twice. Oh nevermind, thrice. This is ridiculous and feels like lazy...
Please keep all narration present tense. Past tense kills immersion in VNs.
Edit: The only thing worse than past tense in VNs is inconsistent tense.
Honestly this is one of the worst written VN's I've seen so far, it's only popular because of the renders.
Switching between past and present tense for the narration is terrible writing. Always stick to present tense in VNs unless you're in a temporary flashback.
Please include an option to change the font, the included one is not always easily readable.
Also remember to stay in present tense, I'm noticing a lot of sentences in past tense mixed in where they don't make sense.You must be registered for see element.
For example, this should say "has" not...