The overall idea is good and I want to see where it goes. Could use an editing pass though. Transitions are out of nowhere and more natural sounding text would help.
Intoxicating Flavor is a real hidden gem. The models are great and later on the animations are amazing.
Plot is mostly crazy but I want to see where it goes.
The only thing I'm worried about is does anything interesting happen with the girls after they join the harem? The corruption is my favorite part but each girl's storyline is pretty short.
It's not a real tag but I discovered that I like "savior" type games where you take a bad girl and make her good (think Quinn from Being A DIK or Fiona from Photo Hunt). Friends in Need is similar but too many bad things happen to really enjoy it like that.