Typos is just one of the issues. Absurd scenario for the plot, nonsensical versioning (1.0 for a demo?), and as mentioned by others, extreme brevity.
For positives: I didn't get any game errors.
For a first impression, it's not good.
Preview pics are rather creepy, as if the dev has a giraffe fetish. Especially noticeable in the cheerleader shot, where the smaller cheerleader's neck is the same length as her head.
You don't need to make AVN to have a valid opinion on an AVN. The same you don't need to write books to criticize one, be a director to critique a movie...etc. Claiming that you do is one the one most comical things possible. He didn't like a game you do. Oh well. It's not the end of the world...
The dev said he is going to redo the first part of the game and split up the 7(or so) days of content and spread it out to 30 days. The supposed issue was too much stuff happening every day, and the the real issue was at that speed, the game was never going to progress time-wise.
The planned...
Realistically that would mean the dev would have to duplicate all the scenes with the daughter. I only know of a couple of titles that tried that, and they mostly gave up after one or two updates. Basically, not happening.
This update was terrible. Maybe drugs are needed to comprehend and enjoy it. It looks bad. The script is bad. It really seems like the dev was angry and just eager to run the game into the ground with this update. It's sad, because this game started out fun and really promising.
What is with the list of mostly obscure file hosts for this game thread? Outside of Google, which is undesirable for obvious reasons for a game of this type, the others are all obnoxious types that try to either inject malware or make it difficult to download. Gofile or Mega (or any of the more...
Trying so hard to monetize a game this early in development is a big red flag. The usual course that follows is longer delays between releases and higher paywalls.
Really impressive start, but I worry that all the branching might become overwhelming as the game develops (for the developer). Looking forward to more.
Very impressive start. The animated sequences are really well done. Only issues I saw were the awkward hair of the MC discussed above and some script (grammar) errors. I tried to unren to look at it, but I couldn't find a way to see the script, even with the latest version of Unren.