Well I loved the part when they where in the motel, the mother failing resisting the temptation and the boy trying to corrupt her. After the motel I lost some interes, I read some part skip others its just my opinion but I was hopping they spend more days in the motel. Dont miss understand me I...
I apologize in advance for my bad English, and I will try my best to give an idea and make sense.
Why dont apply a cutting time, all days at the same time give the interest and the user have some time after to retrive it, 5 hours, 10 hours, 1 hour, I dont know how much you decide. If you dont...