I'm just starting this and I am enjoying it.
How can a story feel like it's both overloaded with side stories, and "yeah life isn't a straight line"? I feel that the flashback for the story of how the MC threw up in the cop's mouth during college was a little too detailed with her drinking and...
Pretty good progress with Lilly. I'm surprised that Victoria really went that far just to make her ex jealous. Here I am playing the MC trying to be the nice guy with Victoria.
Can't wait for the MC to tell Evelynn that she's also fooling around with Ashley. Then again, given the AVN on Ashley's computer, she might be down for some family bonding.
I'm not happy with the overblown bimbo proportion on Lisa. The overdone tits, ass, and lips are just too much. Even the fake tan job. Part of me tries to rationalize it as the therapist is trying to see just how far she can go with her hyno brainwashing and the plastic surgery but I think she...
Minor nitpick, but in the intro, there was quite a bit of white text on a white background or very light background. See the introduction of the wife's gym friend, the couple's wedding photo, and even when first looking for something online to spice up the love life. Some of the later white text...