So far i have enjoyed the plot and I don't mind if the plot moves a little slow. I have also played plenty of games where money management has been important and if you run out of money then you need to not do that the next time. If you plan for a game to have a system that will be important...
I have to agree about the money. It seems like it will make in impact in the beginning but if in the end if it doesn't add to the story or get used in a meaningful way, don't include it.
If someone is unable to differentiate between them then there is probably a chemical imbalance that needs to be addressed. This could also include paranoia, hallucinations, and schizophrenia. It may not be a simple fix.
Having the best makes sense since the MC had a life before the game starts. Some of the games though introduce the best friend at the start and then they just kind of fade away and become a background character. Which does happen in life sometimes but can be quite sad depending on how good the...
Some bad grammar I can understand or typos here and there aren't bad, I see that in published books sometimes. Things that are added to the story for no reason or that don't make sense irritate me though. Like the author had a fun thought that would be great for another game but didn't want to...