discussion VN Ren'Py DAZ Assassins [Prologue] [Desert Dog]

[DesertDog]

Allow others to update?

1. no

Developer Name

DesertDog

Developer Links

Subscribestar - Discord - Itch

Version

Prologue

Latest Update

Jun 9, 2023

Release Date

May 31, 2023

Language

English

OS

1. Windows
2. Linux
3. MacOS
4. Android

Overview:
Your family has run the pinnacle private covert mission organization, for the Western World, for generations. The top of their field, unchallenged, until six months ago, when operatives started disappearing, missions sabotaged, and safe houses compromised. A new player was in the game, an organization known simply as Shadow, and they had their sites set on your family. Now it’s up to you to protect your family and destroy Shadow, before they destroy everything and everyone you love.​

Spoiler: Genre:

Corruption, Group Sex, Lesbian, Sleep Sex, Harem, Incest, Male Domination, Male Protagonist, MILF, Pregnancy, Romance

Spoiler: Installation:

1 - Extract and run.

Spoiler: Changelog:

300 renders 0 animations

Spoiler: Developer Notes:

All corrections and errors have been fix this is the full prologue.

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[SeveredRealms]

Approved and mirrors added. GL with your game.

 

[Nezron]

I know this is just like an intro or demo. I will wait until next update to really say anything, but maybe take a look at The Daddy Plan, that was a demo also, but it had more. At least have a sex scene with a side girl or something to show what kind of sex scenes we can expect in the future.

well anyway for those that are interested, it is just a bunch of reading atm. Not criticism just facts. Peace.

 

[Moss]

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92 renders?? Too short for me to give it a try. Will wait till the next update. Good luck Dev.​

 

[DesertDog]

I know this is just like an intro or demo. I will wait until next update to really say anything, but maybe take a look at The Daddy Plan, that was a demo also, but it had more. At least have a sex scene with a side girl or something to show what kind of sex scenes we can expect in the future.

well anyway for those that are interested, it is just a bunch of reading atm. Not criticism just facts. Peace.

thank you for your comment but depending on the girl sex with them will be later on for them and depending on the girls you want.

 

[Andyjai]

Just finished the demo, there is a lot of spelling mistakes and wrong words written but overall a good start.

 

[SeveredRealms]

Just finished the demo, there is a lot of spelling mistakes and wrong words written but overall a good start.

Its being gone through as this is being posted.

 

[Frazzanova]

Man, this needs a proof read. Typo on every other slide.

 

[mrbobby]

i don't get why more developers that are not fluent in English (and this is not just a dig at DesertDog here), why don't they use one of the multiple free spelling/language/gramma programs out there, this is not an ad or anything, but i've used Grammarly for years it's not perfect but then again im not publishing anything other than dumb forum or social media comments if i was trying to make money selling something i would at least do the bare minimum and try to eliminate spelling error, it literally works as a standalone document on their web page or straight in your browser, and let be fair this "demo" is so small it would literally have taken under 5 minutes to go through

 

[nabuto83]

Typos is just one of the issues. Absurd scenario for the plot, nonsensical versioning (1.0 for a demo?), and as mentioned by others, extreme brevity.
For positives: I didn't get any game errors.

For a first impression, it's not good.

 

[Telgar]

The Demo was posted so that the Dev could make a Subscribestar. As mentioned by SeveredRealms the typos are being dealt with.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

dunno why this is restricted, not even a loli tag and no sex scenes.

 

[SeveredRealms]

dunno why this is restricted, not even a loli tag and no sex scenes.

Its a DEMO..... Not all girls are shown yet. Its planning ahead. This is not even half of the prologue and as stated before only posted in advance to get set up with SS.

 

[Telgar]

Honestly dont know. Can the tags on a post name not be changed? Like if a game switches from Daz to something else is it just stuck at daz until a new thread is made?

They dont put tags in threads until they are actual in the game for a reason, I dont see why this would be any different.

Many Dev's like to post all the tags they intend to put into the game, so people are aware of what is coming and can make an informed decision.

 

[SeveredRealms]

The game is where is belongs. I swear some of you bitch just to bitch and some of you are too lazy to read other posts before doing said bitching. For those here to get information here is a screenshot straight from his discord a little bit ago.


So we are not moving the thread. We know more than you do in advance and enough with telling everyone who is right or wrong or trying to justify something you know nothing about. If this continues I will start removing posts.

 

[mrbobby]

The game is where is belongs. I swear some of you bitch just to bitch and some of you are too lazy to read other posts before doing said bitching. For those here to get information here is a screenshot straight from his discord a little bit ago.
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So we are not moving the thread. We know more than you do in advance and enough with telling everyone who is right or wrong or trying to justify something you know nothing about. If this continues I will start removing posts.

well someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed today and chose violence

but also your "bitching" about people "bitching" about information that by your own quote shows it only came out today, so information they would have had no reasonable chance to read as most of the comments are from yesterday and older,
i get that the "bitching" can become a bit irritating to a mod especially when half the threats being made are requested for a Mac or Android version, but on the other side, with the absurd amounts of half-finished or straight-up abandoned projects, is it really that surprising that some people are reacting when it seems yet another developer is in more of a hurry to get the bare minimum out so he/she can get a patrion, subscribestar, itch or whatever else up when by your own quoit and the developers' own statement, it's only a matter of a few days for a better experience,

i guess my question would be, then why the hurry, i mean if you have been on here or literally any other VN download site, you would know that people comment on bad writing, bad grammar, poor translations and on and on and on.

And before, because someone seems especially defensive about this project, I'm not criticising you, the developer or anybody else, im purely asking a question,

why is it that some developers are in such a hurry to get a pay-me page up before they even have anything to show for it? i know other developers do the same, i just think what is catching people's eye this time, is the below even for a demo language and how short it is

 

[Mr. Tearson]

well someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed today and chose violence

but also your "bitching" about people "bitching" about information that by your own quote shows it only came out today, so information they would have had no reasonable chance to read as most of the comments are from yesterday and older,
i get that the "bitching" can become a bit irritating to a mod especially when half the threats being made are requested for a Mac or Android version, but on the other side, with the absurd amounts of half-finished or straight-up abandoned projects, is it really that surprising that some people are reacting when it seems yet another developer is in more of a hurry to get the bare minimum out so he/she can get a patrion, subscribestar, itch or whatever else up when by your own quoit and the developers' own statement, it's only a matter of a few days for a better experience,

i guess my question would be, then why the hurry, i mean if you have been on here or literally any other VN download site, you would know that people comment on bad writing, bad grammar, poor translations and on and on and on.

And before, because someone seems especially defensive about this project, I'm not criticising you, the developer or anybody else, im purely asking a question,

why is it that some developers are in such a hurry to get a pay-me page up before they even have anything to show for it? i know other developers do the same, i just think what is catching people's eye this time, is the below even for a demo language and how short it is

Hmm... It's not that we're defensive about it. It's that we know more about it than the public. The reason why this Dev rushed it, and yes, I do agree that he posted a bit too soon, he was mostly trying to set everything up. To get it ready for the real thing. I'd just be a bit patient and wait on this until the next update come out. I get the feeling this game will be a good one for us perverts. Lol.

If any more questions, please message me about this so we can keep this as clean as possible.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

well someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed today and chose violence

but also your "bitching" about people "bitching" about information that by your own quote shows it only came out today, so information they would have had no reasonable chance to read as most of the comments are from yesterday and older,
i get that the "bitching" can become a bit irritating to a mod especially when half the threats being made are requested for a Mac or Android version, but on the other side, with the absurd amounts of half-finished or straight-up abandoned projects, is it really that surprising that some people are reacting when it seems yet another developer is in more of a hurry to get the bare minimum out so he/she can get a patrion, subscribestar, itch or whatever else up when by your own quoit and the developers' own statement, it's only a matter of a few days for a better experience,

i guess my question would be, then why the hurry, i mean if you have been on here or literally any other VN download site, you would know that people comment on bad writing, bad grammar, poor translations and on and on and on.

And before, because someone seems especially defensive about this project, I'm not criticising you, the developer or anybody else, im purely asking a question,

why is it that some developers are in such a hurry to get a pay-me page up before they even have anything to show for it? i know other developers do the same, i just think what is catching people's eye this time, is the below even for a demo language and how short it is

Most likely because for some devs the AVN is their only income and rent is due soon, food is running out, etc. Those few days can be a huge difference if you are hungry that whole time. It also doesn't help that SS takes forever to review new AVNs (dunno what they are reviewing if they allow everything anyway), and are probably first come, first serve, so it's best to get into the queue asap when waiting those few extra days can mean extra weeks in limbo (ie "this page is currently under review") and not getting paid.

 

[JeffersonSound]

This is my first review on LC but it's an important one.

FIrst of all - THIS IS A DEMO - it is in no way complete or pretending to be something it is not. So all those here knocking it need to step back and give these guys a chance.

I won't go into too much detail but this AVN shows real promise (I have played HUNDREDS): it's funny from the get go, it's a sharp (ignore the spelling) writing style, lots of techy detail - if you are a fan of military style dialogue, you'll like this for sure, the characters have all got the beginnings of interesting backstories - all to follow, the mom and her sis are hot!
The story is good, there's real scope for a deep and twisting story here. It's definitely going to be a rollercoaster! I will be following this one closely.

Yes, I know I am new, but only new here and not to the AVN genre.

 

[mrbobby]

im starting to think there is something im missing about precisely this developer, yes there are people addressing the many spelling errors and that it is shorter than the normal "demos" we tend to see, nothing new there,
but for some odd reason for precisely this developer precisely this VN, we're seeing mods attacking people and now people leaving "reviews" for a 5min demo, there are tons of good VNs out there and i can't remember i've ever seen behaviour like this before, is this developer an old beloved developer with a cult following just under a new name or something, i've never seen people run interference this much for any VN on any site